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The Mark on Eleanor’s Shoulder
Everyone called me crazy for marrying a sixty-year-old woman.
It wasn’t her dresses.
Not her house.
Not her money.
I fell in love with the way Eleanor Vasquez listened to me.
My father, Frank Dalton, treated almost every conversation like an opportunity to correct someone.
My aunt usually believed she knew what I was going to say before I said it.
My cousins waited for me to finish talking so they could explain what I should have done differently.
Eleanor listened as though my thoughts had weight.
I was thirty-one when we met.
She was fifty-nine.
Fourteen months later, we married.
My family hated it.
My father fired me from the management position I had held at Dalton Earthworks for nine years after I announced our engagement.
My cousin mocked me.
My aunt begged me to reconsider.
I thought they were judging the age difference.
I was wrong.
Our wedding took place at a former hacienda surrounded by candles, white flowers, musicians, and an unusual amount of security.
That should have bothered me more than it did.
Men in black suits stood near the entrances with radios in their ears.
Security watched the courtyard.
Another team guarded the private wing.
I told myself Eleanor was wealthy enough to require it.
That night, in our honeymoon suite, she placed a thick envelope and truck keys on the table.
“One million dollars and a truck,” she said.
I pushed the envelope away.
“I don’t need any of that. Having you is enough.”
Her face changed.
“Son…”
She stopped.
“I mean, Travis…”
I heard it.
Then she removed her shawl.
On her left shoulder was a dark, round mark with an irregular edge.
I knew that mark.
My mother, Maria Dalton, had carried one near the same place on her collarbone.
She had died from cancer when I was seven.
“That mark,” I whispered. “Why do you have it?”
Eleanor closed her eyes.
“It isn’t a birthmark.”
“What?”
“It was tattooed.”
The deadbolt was locked.
The curtains were closed.
Security stood outside.
“Who are you?”
“I’m still Eleanor.”
“How long have you known who I am?”
Silence.
Then:
“Before we met.”
My stomach turned.
Our bookstore meeting had been arranged.
She had hired a private investigator to find me.
She knew where I worked.
Where I lived.
That I had ended a long engagement.
Even where I spent Saturday mornings while my truck was being serviced.
“You weren’t looking for a husband.”
“No.”
She hesitated.
“Not at first.”
“What was I?”
“A promise.”
Then she warned me:
“If you leave before hearing me, your father will tell you a version that protects him.”
That stopped me.
“What does my father have to do with this?”
“Everything.”
Eleanor opened another envelope.
Old photographs slid onto the table.
The first showed my mother as a young woman.
Dark hair.
Wide smile.
A white blouse.
Beside her stood Eleanor.
Much younger.
Their arms were around each other.
Both had similar dark marks near their shoulders.
“Your mother and me,” Eleanor said.
“Why do you both have them?”
“We got them together when we were nineteen.”
They weren’t truly identical.
Memory had made them identical.
Two sisters had chosen similar ugly little tattoos because Maria joked that everyone else got hearts and flowers.
I stared at Eleanor.
“She was your sister?”
“Yes.”
“My mother had no sister.”
“She had me.”
Birth certificates.
School records.
An old newspaper clipping.
Eleanor Maria Vasquez.
Maria Elena Vasquez.
Same parents.
Same childhood address outside Las Cruces.
Born two years apart.
Maria was the younger sister.
Eleanor was the older.
“You’re my aunt.”
“Yes.”
The woman I had married that afternoon was my mother’s sister.
I accused her of marrying her nephew.
Eleanor shook her head.
“No.”
“Stop saying that!”
“Travis, Maria was your biological mother. Frank was your biological father. But Maria didn’t carry you.”
I stopped moving.
“Then who did?”
Eleanor’s eyes filled.
